Niteowl;
My, my, so many reviews. I'll keep mine as short and sweet as this lovely poem.
Firstly, I love it. As you've already heard, short and sweet is definitely my thing and adding such simple but provocative words throws this poem right over the awesome cliff. Favorite lines:
our worlds blended
but we never collided.
Absolutely gorgeous to read. The whole space-oriented, stary-eyed theme really sucked me in too. I also like how you left this poem lower-cased. I think it really says something here - almost like the narrator is whispering what he/she really just wants to scream into the galaxies.
Just lovely, keep writing!
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