Hi Roxy here!
I know that this is your first poem so I think that we all need a bit of encouragement, cause it takes courage to show others your work! So well done for being brave enough!
I thought that this was a really cute and sweet poem and I liked how you started with how you met and progressed into a relationship, its a real down to earth poem, about real love and you describe the feelings that every person gets going into a new relationship well so good job!
I think that the last paragraph is really sweet and honest! Its my favorite paragraph!
Overall I think that this is a really good first poem!
I really hope you keep it up!
PM me if you need any help!
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