Every time i cry this happens I really enjoyed the part when you wrote " The image goes from your eyes to your heart and makes you feel it Feel the reality of it all But you wish you didn't.
You don't want to see it, your mind prays it was a dream. But your heart knows it isn't
and makes you face it. You can't. You hear a crack and feel your eyes crumble." That part was so strong to me it spoke to me. It made me actually cry a little because of how strong this poem is. Keep up the great work.
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