Hello there , this is a boy from the Future to review your poem............
At first I'd like to say that this poem is great and contains a great message inside it. I really like this poem. This poem does not rhyme but still it express everything and sounds very soothing. You've shown Rain from two perspectives and it shows the maturity of yours in a positive sense. I could not find any grammatical mistake . I'd like to see more and even better in Future for you as you really possess the potential. All the best.
Keep up the good work and Keep writing
-gauravkundu32-
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