I Dont think this can be called as a poem?
Rhyming is not necessary but look you didnt use capital letters for the beginning of the sentences
I Didnt get the lines
will she vomit facts and causes?
Try to use sensible words.
You could use puke instead of vomit
But you need alot alot of practice.
KEEP GOING
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