Young Writers Society

Here to review!

My name is Quest, and I will be reviewing this fine piece of work for you today, because it is Review day, and I want to knock this out of the Green Room, because somebody has to, y'know?

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So the first thing I noticed was that your piece matched your title. Is that a coincidence, or were you planning on that? Does it mean something deeper than what it is saying? These are all questions that could be answered in the next piece of this installment.

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I also noticed that there wasn't much explaining going on in this story. I don't know if you wanted it like that, some people write their story with little or barely any details (Goodness knows I have done it once upon a time) but there is that certain balance that I believe one should do to describe their work, and I think this falls a little short of that goal. Not much, mind you, but just enough for me to be nit-picky.

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I have to say, you left me at a cliffhanger. You certainly did! I did not know what would happen for the entire story, however short it may be, because you always kept me guessing with your work!

I love this! It gives many a meaning, both shallow in depth and deep! I do hope you keep on writing things like this. It is truly magnificient.

I hope this helped,
Quest