Hey, yo, Anja84! Strangelove here on this PokeReview Day and I have a review for you!
Well, I enjoyed this. I'm not that sure what to overall think of it, but I liked it. It was short and sweet. The lines were fluent and pieced together well. No over exaggerated word choice or the attempt to push all romantic words to a fault.
What I liked about this is the comparison of heavy metal to the romance of a couple. How it starts off with some peaceful strings, then gradually intensifies as time goes. I honestly never seen this comparison before. I mean, "sweet guitar strings pluck like you do to my heart" we've all seen that. Not only do you toss in something more original, but you pack it short. You don't go over the top like your name is Sylvester Stallone.
The emotion of it, felt somewhat heartless. I understand how the narrator can be scorned or confused or just depressed, but it's one of those poems. The poem that takes a deeper side yet doesn't care to explain some stuff. You just approach it with somewhat of an artistic idea about romance, but it feels insecure to be honest. Just, it doesn't explain what needs to be explain.
Overall, good job.
Strange gives you..
8.4/10
Good job,
Keep writing,
Stay groovy, my friend.
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