I like how you put this poem under "lyrical" because it is perfectly musical. The wording and the flow feels so sweeping.
I definitely feel this on a personal level, fathers and daughters can have troubled relationships. Its hard to think of what your missing and not wonder what could have been.
This poem I think deserved a bit more mystery than what you gave it, but in its simplicity your soul truly shines through which is the important part of writing. Keep at it!
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