Hello, Subtle here to review on review day! So, first off. Great title, is a killer to rein readers in. I was really attracted by the format of this poem as well, as you divided them into small stanzas with short sentences that flowed nicely. I really liked how you kept the sentences short here, because it really gave that short and ominous rhythm this poem needed. I don't have any nitpick to be honest, as for the content is very well done.
So, great poem! Keep it up!
-S.s
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