Edit: So I've decided on the first stanza. The one I'm leaving out is in spoilers, just in case anyone would like to see it. And yes, a lot of it was forced--it started from "She retreats" and went from there.
Spoiler! :
Her words go unheard
She's never seen; she only observes
No one knows her name
And no one knows her pain
And she's alone
In the crowd
(spoken)--why is everyone so loud?
So she retreats into her mind
And builds her castle in the sky
Thinking maybe if she makes it high
That she can leave her troubles behind
And every day
She hopes someone will look her way
And every night
She cries herself to sleep
Cuz no one does
How, how would you feel
If your words
Went unheard?
How would you cope
If you weren't seen, and only observed
How would you like it
If no one knew your name
How would you like it?
Tell me, would you do the same?
Would you retreat into your mind
And build your castle in the sky
Thinking maybe if you make it high
You can leave
Your troubles behind
And every day
Would you dare to hope
For someone else to look your way
And every night would you cry yourself to sleep?
Why can't you see her?
And why can't you hear her?
Is she so unimportant
That she goes unnoticed?
What's a girl to do
To get through to you
Daydreamin' girl.
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Aaannnnd I don't like the ending. Tacked on, kinda fits but out of place, sounds forced......... I'm not so good with endings either.
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