Hey all! This is a collection of my older flash fiction stories (each one about 300-500 words). I thought it would be sinful to flood valuable forum space with every single one of these in a separate topic, so I just posted a bunch. Comments are appreciated, but I will definitely understand if you only comment on one or two pieces rather than all of them.
EDIT: Fixed some minor mistakes and removed spoilers, as they ruined the formatting, and added one more (Meadow).
EDIT #2: Fixed up Meadow a bit, added rating.
Bog
The bog is not a good place to be. It is not a good place to look at, or even think about. All it takes is one step to the wrong side, and you will find yourself swallowed by a disgusting mass, smothering and crushing you from all directions. You may try to scream, but it is the bog; you think, who else is silly enough to wander in here?
But saying that it is not a good place to be is a little irrelevant now. You were a fool, and you wandered in anyway. You saw a little puddle and thought to avoid it, and there's that wrong step you never wanted to take. Now the sticky mass is pulling you down faster than you can realize what is going on. The shock from such a development makes sure you never had the chance to find a branch to grab on. It's over, you think, and all you can do now is hope that you will have the luck to die painlessly.
Suddenly - mercy, you think, a god truly does exist in this world - your flailing hand happens upon a thick, moist branch. Survival instincts do the rest of the work for you. You pull harder than you've ever pulled before in your entire life, and you begin to see the gray light of the bog again.
What you don't realize, however, is that the bog is in on it. Just as you pull one last time to free your leg, the branch snaps, and you are back in the clenched fist of the miry filth.
Why, you think. Why did I ever wander into this place? Well, that's the damndest thing - everybody talks about the bog like it is paradise. Provided you don't take the wrong step, of course. Even though you've heard so much about the unfortunate people who couldn't avoid that dreaded wrong step, for some reason you thought you'd be the exception. You were not. Indeed, the only thing you are now is just another victim of the bog.
An Awkward Moment
He had slain thousands on his way up. He remembered each death vividly; every throat he stepped on to silence its death throes, every defeated opponent's back stabbed as they tried vainly to crawl to safety. It would have been very irresponsible of him to leave somebody alive so that they may do to him what he did to them.
With a cold and calculating mind, he destroyed their fortresses. The opposition was strong, but he had learned their every weakness and their every flaw - no loophole went untouched, no crack unmolested. He would come in, and an hour later, the ancient fortress would crumble behind him - the labour of many generations of hands, destroyed in but a moment. Even those that offered no resistance had to die, for the possibility that they would spawn the one that would defeat him remained very real.
His path, of course, was uphill all the way. Nothing but scorched earth remained in his wake, and no living thing but maggots preying on the dead was allowed to survive. He fed off the energy of his fallen victims to keep himself going, and go he did - until now, as he stood finally at the very top, and there was not a soul around him.
And then came the most awkward of moments, when a little thought crawled into his head.
What now?
Apex
In tiny pathways ranked by blades of grass, amongst the heavy wet branches, there crawled an Ant, foraging for food. Thought the Ant to herself, "I am but an ant. I am naught before these great green pillars, and I struggle to make way through the vast forests of felled Trees and foliage. Yet, despite living as a mere ant, I am lord among Aphids." Thence came a loud croak, and the Ant ceased her thoughts, escaping the ominous sound.
Upon a pile of leaves, there sat a rock; and upon the rock there sat a bloated brown Bullfrog, bathing in the sunlight. Thought the Bullfrog to himself, "I am but a bullfrog. I am naught before the Rain, whose absence is my doom, and whose presence is my paradise. Yet, be a bullfrog as I might, I am terror amongst Ants." Thence a jagged shadow slid over the fields, and the Bullfrog hurriedly fled beneath a bush.
And in between the forests and the sky, there soared a proud Aegle, seeking sustenance for her young. Thought the Aegle to herself, "I am the Aegle, master of my domain, above all - no Tree shall impede my way, and no Rain shall wash away my nest. My augury spells death for all that is beneath. Yet, just like my prey respects me, I must respect my prey; for without them, how would my young ever survive?" Thence a bullet cut short the Aegle's musings, and the raptor fell limply to the ground.
In a forest clearing there stood a Man, beholding the Aegle descend from the skies. Thought the Man to itself, "I am Man, and what was that Aegle thinking, soaring so haughtily above all, as if it is the master? No Tree shall impede my way either, for I hold a hatchet; and no Rain shall leave uncorrupted, for I poison the air." Thence another bullet cut short the Man's own thoughts, and it fell before a fellow Man.
The Terrible Tree
No sound flies through the scorched wasteland; even the wind that drives forth the lonely cloud-streaks of the metal sky makes hardly a noise as it sweeps up small clouds of dust. Savage shadows wait in frozen rage behind the slumped and collapsed skeletons of buildings, each more menacing than the last, all hiding from the old, impotent sun. Yet the lord of these lies by the delta of the black river, where the water never foams - it starvedly lashes out from beneath crooked roots, which keep shackled to the earth the last reminder of life: a warped, aged, terrible tree.
A lone symbol adorns the ancient bark, faintly reminiscent of a pentagram, yet with many more lines. They come together in vicious points, run together in unnaturally straight lines, fatten and fast without warning; not truly sketched, but rather traced against a bladed weapon. Five circular burns crown the points of the wicked sigil, and a great black halo of soot spreads outward with flame-like protrusions. None are aware of the existence of the symbol - for even those that enter the barren never make it to its dead heart, whereat grapples the earth the terrible tree.
The whole world fell to its knees at the nameless cataclysm. Despite the many years of recovery, none dare settle even the outskirts the thousand-mile circle on the east cost of the great continent. And, for an event so great, none know how the apocalypse occurred - perhaps the two skeletons by the tree (the ones clutching a metal-bound, though badly burned, book) know what lead up to it, and the ones several hundred miles away know what it looked like, but none have witnessed the entire event - none save for the terrible tree.
Meadow
The sun's rays shone through the leafy canopies of the trees surrounding the meadow, producing dancing shadows in the wavering sea of flowers. Pollen and loose petals gracefully sailed in the air, their flight scored by a chorus of singing forest birds. This peaceful sanctuary teemed with life - a ferret scurried into his hole, and a huntress fox pawed the ground there in defeat. Butterflies fluttered in contest with the petals, carried by the breeze. A playful fawn hopped to the meadow, and trotted right to a nearby mound for the lush grass that grew there. Pieces of burnt and twisted metal stuck out from the curious mound - the gravesite of some forgotten machine - and the metal glistened with the morning dew. Once, a long time ago, there was war here.
The birds' voices momentarily drowned in the roaring of a fleet of black helicopters passing overhead. Gunfire from somewhere in the nearby forest cast jets of green foliage into the air - some shots aimed up at the helicopters, others across the meadow. The fawn fell down with several bullet holes in its side, and the fox ran off into the forest. Heavy metal boots crushed the grass and the flowers, and soon, a platoon of a dozen armoured men stood in the meadow, listening to the barking of their commanding officer.
A strange gust of wind blew leaves from the trees, and a cloud of red vapours settled in the meadow. The soldiers frantically fumbled with their helmets, pulling on gas masks and shutting their visors. Those that did not react in time fell to the ground, blood-streaked foam seeping from their helmets, arms flailing in spasms, bodies writhing. More shots sounded as the soldiers killed their own men to spare them from the agonizing yet prolonged death. That's when small sparks appeared in the fog, igniting the flammable gas mixed with the poison.
The sun's rays shone through the gnarled skeletons of the trees surrounding what was once a meadow, producing ghastly shadows on the blackened earth. Ash and dust clouded the air in dead silence. This bald mound seemed devoid of any life - the charred muzzle of the ferret stuck out from the ground, caked with hardened froth. Dead bugs littered the ground. The folds in a butterfly's wings carefully followed the outline of a heavy military boot's track, trampled into the ground by the few escaping soldiers. The half-burnt carcass of a fawn lay plastered against the metal - a machine ruined but alive with the spirit of war - and the metal glistened with blood. Once, a short time ago, there was peace here.
How the Pen Fell
This is a story about a pen and its vertical voyage. Because such an event took place over the matter of a second, and we have a story we must tell, we will have to resort to slow motion in order to properly chronicle its adventures.
The trip would begin high above the vast plains of the Desktop from the loosening grip of the Person. As the grip weakened due to unusual frustrations, the pen found itself free of one finger and then the next, until it hung weakly between only two fingers. Soon even those relaxed somewhat and at last, the pen was on its way.
For untold milliseconds did the pen sail through the air, point down. The eerie blue glow of the monolithic Monitor dimly lit up the transparent side of the pen's hull, sometimes disappearing in the sunny shine of the Table Lamp. The pen bore witness to and partook in many wonderful happenings - it beheld the yawning of the Housecat, narrowly avoided the Person's other hand trying to catch it, and surfed with reckless abandon in the torrent of air provided by the Fan.
Just as the pen rode out of the Fan's gulfstream, its trip would take place for the worse. As this is a complete, functional, and, according to statistics, quite literate tale, it is wont to have conflict - and, being called upon thusly, conflict indeed came in the form of the Desktop. The pen's point landed a shattering blow on the Desktop, no doubt leaving an inspiring mark for all future falling pens to see, and collapsed on the flat surface.
Of course, no story is complete without a proper ending to tie all the loose ends and to add the essential drama. Because now it turns out that the Person was actually the Writer, and the "unusual frustrations" came after writing about completely pedestrian subjects and embellishing them with fancy diction that, alone, attempted to and failed horribly at giving the story any purpose!
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