Young Writers Society

This is a song from my book in progress.


Around,
all around,
the shadows gather.
The light for which we always yearned,
flared once, then died.
A time of peace
of happiness,
gone in a whisper of wind,
by black magic.


(Chorus)
The night falls
in a heavy cloak.
Entwined
are we.


It is a night of dark premise,
a song of blood.
It is a time of sorrow,
of hate that curls,
into clouds of death.


Morro of Sago,
the Father of death,
shall rise to the throne.
His mask,
Black as the living night,
kills all that stare.


Every moment of eternity
he waits.


(Chorus)
The night falls
in a heavy cloak..
Entwined
are we.


A clouded vision of memory,
understanding and...wisdom,
washed away,
in a torrent of rain.
All hope must surely perish,
and fall into
the now blackened,
unfertile earth.


(Chorus)
The night falls
in a heavy cloak..
Entwined
are we.


Morro shall rise
and destroy all.
Ravage the homes
of the living.


Lost souls surround us.
We have lost the light.

(Chorus)
The night falls
in a heavy cloak.
Entwined
are we.

Very nice. Hopefully, we'll get to read you book.

I like it, though I'm not sure how it'll sound as an actual song, ya know? Sounds like it might be better as a poem or something; shorter, but with the same theme. OR, it might even sound awesome as I song! Good job, keep writing!