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Fri Mar 24, 2023 4:26 pm
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Man, it's been ages since I did a NaPo thread, but I'm feeling awash with the beauty of the world today, so let's write some poetry for 2023!

2020: Dragon: Disconnected
2019: A Dragon of Carefully Chosen Words
2018: Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon
2017: Cadi's Caterwaulings

Index
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Apr 4
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Last edited by Cadi on Sun Apr 30, 2023 4:31 pm, edited 25 times in total.
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Sat Apr 01, 2023 9:52 pm
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#1
cardboard kernels
crunching chomping
patchily glazed with crystal sweet
sticky fingers
picking mixing
heavenly snacks in a cinema seat
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Spoiler! :
I love the sound and rhythm of poem #1! I actually had to whisper it out loud to myself just because I wanted to feel the words in my mouth. :] Your title is also so good omg xD The alliteration <333
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#2
Plant pots on my balcony
ignored for the last six seasons
wake for spring:
towering dandelions, wild grasses, stubborn chives and garlic
thrive amid the stalks of my neglect.
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#3
sky blue fades up to azure
where a lone eveningstar sparkles
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Tue Apr 04, 2023 7:21 pm
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#4
Two hundred bones
Six hundred muscles
Five whole litres of imitation seawater
Thirty teeth
Twenty nails
Ten million racing thoughts

Spoiler! :
eeeehh
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poem #4 is a vibe honestly - sometimes, numbers are perfect to exploit for poetry, and I really love the idea of blood being thought of as "imitation seawater" - very unique imagery! Can't wait for more of your awesome NaPo poetry! <3
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#5
For the right sort of problem on the right sort of day and with just enough
uninterrupted
time
a programmer falls into flow state
(tackle this corner of the puzzle first and then that feeds into another and once we've got that we can kick off a build in the background and turn attention to an edge and perhaps with just a little more tweaking we might have one quadrant starting to resolve into something that looks like a picture)
and suddenly
you've blown right past dinner time.
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#6
meticulous to-do list
black ink on cream
careful dots and crosses
sum up all I've ever been
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#7
I've been working out lately
but climbing a hill uses a whole different set of muscles
and today
there was a hill in front of me.

Walking on rough ground strengthens your stabilisers
so next time it will be easier
but tonight
my legs just ache.

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Throwing up a poem on the way to bed after a busy day - I feel like I could do better with this premise, but this is Good Enough For NaPo!
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#8
We're going to walk along the river to a pub to get dinner.
We're going to walk down to the river, and along it, to get dinner.
We're going to walk - or maybe we're going to drive
We're going to drive to the river
walk along the river
walk back and drive to dinner.
We're going to drive to a pub to get dinner by the river.
We're going to a pub to get dinner and we'll walk back by the river.
We're going to walk
drive
get dinner
by the river.
We're--
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#9
I spliced a string to my sternum
and tied it also to you,
craving a closer connection
to you and the things that you do.

My feet were fixed in my footprints;
yours went wandering afar,
so I spliced a string to my sternum
and tore my ribcage apart.
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Mon Apr 10, 2023 7:03 pm
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#10
Changing weather hour by hour:
wind and sun and April showers;
new leaves green upon the bower
jewelled with rain and budding flowers.

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A third of the way through already!
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#11
The sky is never dark in the city.
Once,
we traced a world in the heavens
replete with queens, hunters and hounds
splashed
across a river of stars.
Tonight, all I have are aeroplanes.
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Wed Apr 12, 2023 8:43 pm
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#12
shoulders joints pinned
to the sides of a hunched neck
teeth clamped in the vice of the jaw
ribbons of muscle wrapped tight
around a compressed core of ribs
at the heart of which, there is a flutter
"The fact is, I don't know where my ideas come from. Nor does any writer. The only real answer is to drink way too much coffee and buy yourself a desk that doesn't collapse when you beat your head against it." --Douglas Adams
  








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