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Sun Apr 05, 2020 11:51 pm
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EverLight says...



Fun Fact That I Totally Did Not Just Realize-(Technically) Ori Sagattarii is an alien (alien as in ''being from another world''). Stars, after all, are not from earth (;
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Mon Apr 06, 2020 12:16 am
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Oooh! That's interesting. :) I love little fun facts like that.
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Wed Apr 08, 2020 1:38 pm
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Hey, everyone! I was inspired by @soundofmind's style of scheming for storybooks, so I decided to make a section of the WFP where we can write down the relationships our characters have with each other. With such a large cast, it's easy to get overwhelmed by all the different characters - I know that I've been having trouble keeping track of how Eli will interact with the other mysteries.

Please check out the pad and follow the instructions there! It's hopefully pretty straightforward, but let me know if it's not.
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Wed Apr 08, 2020 7:31 pm
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I will update Enid's bit within/over a few days 馃槈
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Wed Apr 08, 2020 7:52 pm
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Liberty says...



Looks pretty great! I'll do Nyx's either tonight or sometime tomorrow~ c:
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Wed Apr 08, 2020 7:57 pm
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EverLight says...



Looks fantastic @Jaybird (: I'll get Oria's done sometime today.
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Thu Apr 09, 2020 4:12 am
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Okay! I'll be able to get Oria's post up in the SB some time tomorrow (: Also I'm finished writing down her relationships with the other characters in the WFP.
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Thu Apr 09, 2020 2:36 pm
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The pad is looking great so far! My only critique is the pronouns you used, @EverLight - Eli and Peg both use they/them pronouns, not he/him and she/her. I'm also not sure if Oria would dislike Eli because of their gender - Eli is more male-presenting, but they're not a boy. They're nonbinary.

(If you're not sure how to use a traditionally plural noun as a singular noun, let me know - I'd be happy to help! :))
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Thu Apr 09, 2020 3:21 pm
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Hey! Just wanted to say thats syls full name is Sylvan. Not Sylvester, :D
  





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Thu Apr 09, 2020 4:07 pm
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EverLight says...



@SebiGhoul I know his full name is Sylvan, it's just that I was so caught up in what I was writing I forgot :P
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Thu Apr 09, 2020 4:59 pm
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Oookay I'm done mine. I pretty much did what everyone else had for Nyx and related it to that but since @SebiGhoul and @TheMulticoloredCyr didn't have anything for Nyx I left that empty. Not sure what to do about that. ;-;

@jaybird - I didn't know what to do for Eli so I just put a buncha questions. But if you want they can be the sorta people who have met each other in the halls a lot and talk to each other and everything. Sort of friends but not exactly friends. Or they could be friends.

@hiraeth - I wrote "Know each other? Helps him screech with violin? Maybe play pranks together? Possible, I dunno, I'll see. Maybe friends." What if they were prank buddies or something like that? Allies? Friendly with each other?

Okay yeah well that's it. If there's any changes I need to make, please let me know!! c:
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Thu Apr 09, 2020 8:06 pm
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SirenCymbaline says...



Aaayy I'm almost done writing mine

@EverLight looks rad, couldja tell me about the kinds of things Ori and Enid talk about? Like what sorts of things she asks for advice on?
  





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Thu Apr 09, 2020 8:46 pm
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Magebird says...



Your sections look great, @SirenCymbaline and @Liberty! :)

I'm down for whatever you want to do, Liberty. :) Eli's already friends with Theo and Syl, and Enid's kind of like a mentor figure to them, but I love the idea of them already being friends. Alternatively, they could have met a few times in the hallway like you mentioned in the pad, and they become closer over the storybook.
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Thu Apr 09, 2020 8:53 pm
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Liberty says...



Sounds good, Mage! I'll update ~
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