Young Writers Society

Day 5, then! Alright, that makes a lot of sense. So she starts looking for The Hooded Figure when he and the group that's assembled is traveling to Joseph Hayes' house. After meeting the last of the descendants, save for Greywood, they could meet up with Lazuli wherever you think works best (maybe the ruins of Andestine?).

Ruins of Andestine, or Mineplex. Either sounds good to me, either place someone's going to be looking for her.

Don't ruin Mineplex... Its too early for that.

Alrighty so I have caught up with the posts. There's a lot! xD you guys are crazy active for being such a new SB.

My characters is going to be a person named "Aquestioning" (after my own Minecraft character on the computer xD). Although that's not her real name, that's what she goes by.

She's a villain and a follower of Notch. I think I'm gonna make her a spy or something similar. You should see her within the next few days.

She sounds awesome already! I can't wait to see what you'll do with her, @Omnom.

Posted. @Mage if there's anything I should change, just say and I'll rewrite.

That's a really good post, @AnarchyWolf! There's only two things I was hoping you could change. The first is the ending. Can you please make it so The Hooded Figure agrees to letting him bring his horse, and that Finn say that he'll let them stay the night? That way @Oswin1800 and @JuliasSneezer can post sooner and not have to wait for me to respond as The Hooded Figure.

My last question is if you can change The Hooded Figure to Lumm or Lumm Stephens, since that's how he introduced himself?

Also, I just have to mention two parts that really made me grin.

The Hooded Weirdo seems to be confident in his claims, rambling on like an oblivious madman on a soapbox.

Such an ingenious nickname.

He wouldn't stop eating the stupid melon.

The Hooded Figure and his love of melons is not to be messed with.

@Mage sorry! I'll change that now. I'm still getting used to the idea of having limited control over other peoples' characters. One day I shall get better at storybooking!

Edit: Done. I kept the Hooded Weirdo bit, if that's okay. If not then I'll change it. Lumm also took another piece of melon.

Things are looking slow for me. My internet is down so I have to write on my phone

That's perfect, @AnarchyWolf! I was hoping you would keep that bit. And don't worry. It's hard getting used to that sort of thing (I know from my own experience), but you'll definitely get the hang of it!

It's alright, @Poopsie. We still have to wait for @JuliasSneezer (almost put @CupcakesForRealMen there out of habit ), @Oswin1800, and possibly @AnarchyWolf if he wants to use the perfect opportunity to complete the SB challenge. And then the group needs to travel to Joseph Hayes' house and ask him to join before they even start looking for Sivv. So you've got plenty of time.

Also, I am disappointed that none of you have commented on my new avatar.

Hey guys I am crazy busy today and won't be able to post until tomorrow around this time.

Alright!

@Mage That's because it took me ten minutes to identify that it was the severed head of Herobrine floating in a light gray, blackish void... Intresting art choice.

It took someone pointing it out for me to realize it. Nice avatar!