ok, my friend an i like to write and we're writing a story together. i understand if u guys or gals don't want to read it all...cause it's at the end of the 4th chapter with 35,000 words. by the way, read it in book mode... but u don't have to. we actually have no clue as to what we're writing. we're pretty much getting ideas and making it all flow. grammar should be somewhat good.
thanks ahead of time
and if any of you guys can actually find a good plot line this story can follow, be sure to post it
and i do know that the first few chapters are a load of well...you guys understand...don't take the constructive critism too far... i'm only 13 >.>
so this is a ... well descriptive paragraph of what's to come...kinda... not really a plot line...
Algeria is plunged into chaos through deceit, corruption, war, and the dark lord, Gorlan who is threatening to destroy the properity of Algeria. James, a teenage youth must muster up his courage and all his skill and form up with another teenager, Timmoth. Together, they must train until they can defeat any foe. But when war breaks out between Chiloe and Algeria, the two must finish their training in a matter of weeks and venture off to kill Gorlan, who plans to use the turmoil to his advantage.
story may turn into fantasy, not sure ^^
happy reading even if it sucks.
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