I like the start I got on this, but it could use some work and I'm kind of stuck...so please let me know what you think. Oh, and I hate the title.
A love that overwhelms all reason
A love that overwhelms all sense
I long to step close to you
And slip my arms around your waist
The words “I worship you” on the tip of my tongue,
But I don’t know how
To let them out, and be
So completely vulnerable, to anyone
With naked emotion on my face
Desire in my body,
It feels so painfully apparent
A brazen secret whispered to the world
But you’re the one person who
Would never see it.
I have to be careful,
There’s more than just
My heart at stake.
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