I'm really not sure about this one, so any constructive criticism would be more than welcome.
Light
This silhouette lies beside me
Faint curves of silver amidst an eternity of shadow
An engine moans its metallic liturgy,
And for a second light is thrown upon her
A second which seems to linger far beyond its domain,
Silence returns and the moment dies
Darkness reclaims her form, yet beauty remains
Time continues its march heralded only by your breathes
Her etched crescents wax as the moon falls
And as those lunar etchings broaden
A faint pastel glow spreads to you face
The golden sun reflected in your eyes telling me that day has come
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