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samthenthulus neblustarvegakr



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Tue Jul 05, 2005 7:02 am
Caligula's Launderette says...



samthenthulus neblustarvegakr to Sammy A.

Textbooks made out of five endangered
Sequoias and emo tartans run down
Your skin

Crossroads and tupac danced
Rhythmandblues: a cat stevens mirrored life

Techobopblondeblueeyedboy
In shades of black and grey
Tempered by flirty rosesaltpurple

Jousted and battled as the 10th level Jedi
With a green light saber you claimed was your
Alter ego

And
Sicktightmadfresh
Is all you really needed to say.



well at least to make me smile.
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Fri Jul 08, 2005 3:55 pm
Chevy says...



Unorthodox for sure.

But I loved it anyhow. Especially how you combined the words. Sometimes when people do that, they seem to do it just for style and it doesn't actually have a meaning. Yours wasn't like that though...I actually felt it. Great job.
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You're wrong about humanity. They are your greatest creation because they're better than you are. Sure, they're weak, and they cheat and steal and destroy and disappoint, but they also give and create, and they sing and dance and love. Above all, they never give up.
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