Young Writers Society

DarkHeart

the one that knows my darkerside
caged and calloused through time
the one that follows me with eyes
filled with hopeful tears of
glass
the one that holds me
crushing me into a yielding embrace
the one that grasps at
my sanity as it takes the plunge
dragging any useful apoligies with it
the one that screams my name at night
wanting
lusting
crying
for my sake that i wont crucify myself
the one that kisses away self inflicted bruises
black, blue, and purple
bubbling on a canvas of
white
the one that embraces the cruelty of my selfishness
sheltering me from myself
the one that tells me i’m okay
that their allright
and the world’s not dying
the one that knows my darkside
caged and calloused through time
hungry for one damn thank you

Was great to me..

the one that knows my darkside
caged and calloused through time
hungry for one damn thank you

Taking the first parts over was a great ending and adding the damn thank you... is kewl, lol

Xia

It was written well, but I didn't like it as much as you other poems.