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To The Sound Of Tuesday...



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Thu May 12, 2005 7:53 am
Ohio Impromptu says...



To The Sound Of Tuesday

The twilight forced itself on the surroundings,
and paper was the resistance.
Lighting a fire in flesh of caligraphy,
is winning back the lost ground,
from the dead months that left the calendar.

Here I am, back at last week with black hands,
burning the days as a concept.
Something flammable to pass the time,
something flowing to make it right,
euphoria dripping from my seat on the step.

Go find the box that was that prison of notes,
its next to my messed up bed.
Shame thats still in tact because,
leaking is still a contamination,
and one thought comes to mind...

Comtaminate this...
Gone, gone from New York City,
where you gonna go with a head that empty?
Gone, gone from New York City,
where you gonna go with a heart that gone?
  





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Thu May 12, 2005 9:22 pm
emotion_less says...



There were a few spelling errors, but the poem itself was kind of... tranquil? It was a nice read.
  





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Tue May 17, 2005 8:19 am
Ohio Impromptu says...



Why thankyou. :wink:
Gone, gone from New York City,
where you gonna go with a head that empty?
Gone, gone from New York City,
where you gonna go with a heart that gone?
  








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