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a corrupt land



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Mon Apr 18, 2005 6:19 pm
jossymaiye says...



In the midst of corruption
Where there seems to be no perfection
Where the rich riles the poor
And the hungry feed on opression


What shall they gain,
In greed and in threat
But all shall be in vain
And the earth shall rust their feet


Where the oor is sober
Looking for a place to shower
The rich and mighty
Shall all be in power
i know you are dry
but that does`nt mean you should cry
get up and fly
fly reallly high
up to the deep blue sky
  





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Tue Apr 19, 2005 3:22 am
emotion_less says...



There was a typo:
"Where the oor is sober"
I think you mean poor. It wasn't really my type of poetry, but it was written fine.
  








Patience is the strength of the weak, impatience is the weakness of the strong.
— Immanuel Kant, Philosopher