What do you feel
Deep down inside?
I know so many things
are pretence, lies
and exaggeration.
Take off your mask.
I want to see
What it is you hide,
Beneath the lies.
I want to feel your heart
Beating in tune with mine.
Tell me your secrets
And I will listen
But keep my lips sealed.
I want to know you,
To feel your spirit.
You are who you are.
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any comments? i just did this last
night & tweaked it a little this morning.
any ways i can improve it?
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