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Thu Jun 30, 2011 9:51 pm
ongoeslife says...



Thanks, Janika! =) It's nice to get a few encouraging posts like yours every now and then ^_^
  





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Mon Sep 19, 2011 3:21 am
LittleLionWoman says...



Love it! This poem is so true, i'm absolutely tired of reading the typical cliche versions of poems, it's quite depressing. But, this is amazing! good job!
-Little Lion Woman
"This is your life and it's ending one minute at a time." Fight Club
  





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Mon Sep 19, 2011 3:27 am
ongoeslife says...



Thanks! :D
  





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Wed Sep 28, 2011 9:53 pm
ElizabethFiction says...



This has got to be the deepest poem I have ever read! You've got such an incredible sense of depth, especially for your age. Beautiful job!! :)
  





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Thu Sep 29, 2011 2:02 pm
ongoeslife says...



Thank you SO much!! =)
  








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