Just friends

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TeenQueen
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Tue Jun 02, 2009 2:31 pm
TeenQueen says... · Tue Jun 02, 2009 2:31 pm
Removed.
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Tue Jun 02, 2009 3:09 pm
Meep(: says... · Tue Jun 02, 2009 3:09 pm
Hey TeenQueen,
Just a heads up:
This sounds like it belongs more in the Lyrics section.
Unless poems have choruses ._.

Oh, and one other thing:
I would have liked to know how her best friend felt.
That was vague and there was a bit too much emphasis on her regret.

~Have a nice day! :D
Meep(:
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