Phobia Phobia Phobia

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Did you this poem offend you?

  • Yes, It Really Did 33%
  • No, I Loved It 67%

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Please be aware that I wrote this poem through boredom, therefore, you might call it strange. I doubt if this is a poem at all. If you are likely to call it a 'waste of time' and such, then leave without reading it at all.

Phobias

What do you do?
When I smother you?
Phobia Phobia Phobia
What do you do?
When I strangle you?
Phobia Phobia Phobia

Are you a Paraskavedekatriaphobic!?
Or are you Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobic?
Maybe you are a Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobic?
Could you be?
Could you be?
Phobic Phobic Phobic

What is my Phobia?
WHAT IS IT? WHAT IS IT?
What is my Phobia?
WHAT IS IT? WHAT IS IT?

MY PHOBIA IS ... YOU!
Last edited by ThienThienThien on Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:07 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Wow, this was really something. I'm sure you must be one of those 'special' people, eh, Thien?
My friends TTHo95 and Child'splaysucks78 say that this really sucks and I think that they are right. Tee Hee!

And for all those normal YWS people out there, don't worry, I'm not a bad critter, I know this insane guy, and this is revenge XD




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Lol...poetry isn't words spilled on a piece of sh...paper...
Dreams they come and go...ever shall be so...




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If you haven't noticed, this poem was deliberately meant to be strange/crap. I hardly consider it a poem at all. I only created this poem because I was extremely bored and SwottieLottie thought it would be funny to post it on YWS.
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Well, it's wasn't funny...actually, you make a big moron out of yourself...;)
Dreams they come and go...ever shall be so...




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I did not! You did this of your own accord! LIAR! XD




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You did too, Charlotte! Muahaha, everyone knows your real name now SwottieLottie!
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I did not, Thien, now everyone knows YOUR real name, but you already advertised that three times in your username. I don't mind being known as Charlotte. SO: :P




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Thanks Darko.. whatever 666 devil thing... This site needs more humour and strange people (Like Me XD). There are too many boring poems .. I'm just maintaining the balance XD
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Well, I was expecting something strange and kind of creepy. I think you may have inspired me a little ^-^. What the heck is the 3rd phobia??? *googles*
A single plum blossom, then another, opening one by one.
And the first plaintive notes of the bush warbler’s song.
Signs of the coming spring.
To tell the truth, they only make me long
To see you again…




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ThienThienThien wrote:Please be aware that I wrote this poem through boredom, therefore, you might call it strange. I doubt if this is a poem at all. If you are likely to call it a 'waste of time' and such, then leave without reading it at all.

Phobias

What do you do?
When I smother you?
Phobia Phobia Phobia
What do you do?
When I strangle you?
Phobia Phobia Phobia

Are you a Paraskavedekatriaphobic!?
Or are you Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobic?
Maybe you are a Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobic?
Could you be?
Could you be?
Phobic Phobic Phobic

What is my Phobia?
WHAT IS IT? WHAT IS IT?
What is my Phobia?
WHAT IS IT? WHAT IS IT?

MY PHOBIA IS ... YOU!



Hey Thien ^^ Shina here and I'll be your reviewer today.

From reading the title, I was expecting something weird, but this disappointed me. I was hoping for something catchy, but this was not catchy at all. The other reviwers have a right to their own opinions, but they were a little harsh. But at least they didn't lie. This was probably a waste and maybe you should've kept this one to yourself. Try again though.

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You have a fear of Friday the 13th? How dare you? DO NOT SUCCUMB TO PETTY SUPERSTITIONS!
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Yeah...if you want humor you can jump to forum and search for it. It has a lot of funny stuff. In case you didn't notice, this is were "boring" poems are supposed to be...Okay? The saddest thing is that your poem has something, but you didn't even bother to fix it. Oh, and your humor is crappy... Seriously, that poem wasn't funny, it was, as you say, boring....
'till the next time.... :D
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heheheheheheh

this is some crazy stuff, i mean, I thought I coul;d right something unuasual.

I admire your brave insanity, and fierce defense of your internal sanctity.

this was an okay read.
i don't know why you'd make this
but I'd like to.

I sense a spunky sweetness about this whole crazy thing...heh heh.

I think it's almost adorable.
I don't know where you came from and and I don't know where you're headed.
I'm enjoying the ride.

the crazy words the crazy theme about irrational fear of nothing and everything.
I think this all good.




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Darko Demon whatever, it's strange that you posted three comments on my piece of work. At first I thought you were just stating your opinion, but now it seems you are looking for trouble. Sorry, but YWS is no place for this trouble you want to cause. If you want trouble, why not go on another website?

(Sorry for this guys, but I don't understand why he has to come back three times to tell me how pathetic I am and how my work is pathetic.) :)
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It's funny how humans can wrap their mind around things and fit them into their version of reality.
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