Roses revived(the rejection)

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Okay! Good job, the rhymes were awesome.

Now I must point out some things that need to be fixed:

You need to capitalize! And you need to use puncuation!

and you cant but these roses

I think 'but' is supposed to be 'buy'

and if you look hard
you might have some luck
you could find it growing wildly
and have it with a little pluck

The last stanza sounded a little choppy to me, but that's just my opinion.

(Not trying to be harsh. Overall, good job.

I love your poem! there are a few puncuation, capitalization, and spelling errors, but the message is really deep and sweet. keep posting, i'd love to read more!


jenni321