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E'in Sof *Short Version*

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(I think this stanza can stand alone...however they were others that went with it that I've also posted it up, but I think this one is the best and since it seems to me to be able to stand on it's own as a poem, we'll call it the short version of E'in Sof.

It is 3 am and the black sky
overhead resembles a snake,
onyx coils poised to strike. I am
Cleopatra and these pearls will
prove my noose. E'in Sof.




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Ooh, I like this, especially the "onyx coils poised to strike" bit. Good stuff.

I think, yeah, you're right, it can stand alone.

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EnchantressMuffin wrote:Ooh, I like this, especially the "onyx coils poised to strike" bit. Good stuff.

I think, yeah, you're right, it can stand alone.

Muffin


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Hmcreamcomplane.

Sounds nice! :D Very pretty.

-ST
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ShadowTwit wrote:Hmcreamcomplane.

Sounds nice! :D Very pretty.

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This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy