My Journey

I must find
some way or time
that will make me see
somthing inside of me
to make me strong
and forever bond
my love and life
so i can see the light
and know what i want
instead of what i might

Capitalize your "i" 's when referring to yourself. It's spelled "something"

Also, the second to last line doesn't quite flow, it's a little long. Overall, if you revise this poem slightly it would be greatly improved. Sloppy typing isn't a good thing on this site. It's okay if it's sloppy before you post it, just make sure you run it through a spell and grammar check first, and then look for errors the comp. missed.