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Its a new year.
A new time to forget you.
You linger to me as if you were a part of me.
You were my everything,
now I have nothing. No
meaning. No life. No
exitement. No love.
Where are you when I
need you the most.
2012 might be the year I
move on. But it sure feels
like I'm going to fall apart.
I want you......
I need you.
Its a new year.
Where are you when I
need you the most.
It's {there should be a ['] there. Since you're creating a contraction for 'It is'} a New Year.
A new time to forget you.
You linger to me as if you were a part of me.
You were my everything,
now I have nothing.
No meaning. No life. No excitement. No love.
Where are you when I need you the most?
2012 might be the year I move on...
But it sure feels like I'm going to fall apart.
I want you...[Let's think about grammar rules for a second. When you want a long pause, grammar rules state that you should have no more than three periods. More than that is just incorrect grammar, and distracting to the reader.]
I [u]need[u] you.
Right here, where you're trying to under line, you need a slash before the second 'u' Like this-
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[u]need[/u]
But, usually you wouldn't use underlining in a poem anyway. You should use italics when you want to emphasis on anything, especially poetry.
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