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Imagine



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Sun Oct 09, 2011 7:04 pm
IcyFlame says...



You dream the world in which you live in,
your view created by your mind alone.
Imagination; the key to a colourful life
the one you have made your own.

That personal bubble you have for your own
it protects you from all harm
the most powerful weapon you will ever possess
don’t forget it or ignore it

Words are the voices of our hearts
don’t let them fade to nothing.
They are made to be spoken, made to be heard
and tell stories of the past.

Hold them tightly in your hands,
keep them from flying away.
Words are a magic beyond anything else
they are worth everything, yet cost nothing.

Just imagine, a world without voice
is a world without laughter or joy.
How, without words, can we ever express
the feelings we feel deep inside?

Don’t take your voices for granted,
Use them whenever you can
Tell others what it is you are thinking
Imagination; the greatest gift you can have
  





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Sun Oct 09, 2011 7:49 pm
MaryJaneStallheizer says...



I love this! My favorite part line has to be
Imagination; the key to a colorful life
I think that's something that the world forgets every now and then. It reminds me that intelligence isn't the only important thing in the world. Imagination is what gives us a happy life. I loved the flow of this poem too. I hope to hear more from you!
  





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Sun Oct 09, 2011 8:23 pm
SlyNightOwl says...



Oh, wow.. This is amazing! C': I have a friend who needs to read this. She's all about logic and knowledge and scolds me for doing great in English and Art and not so great in math and science. This poem does not lie.
Rah, rah, ree, kick em' in the knee. Rah, rah, rass, em' in the... OTHER KNEE!
  





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Sun Oct 09, 2011 8:40 pm
Rob says...



I really like it. You really capture the entire idea of how imagination works , and how important it is.
You have set the mood really well , and with this kind of theme , it is not that easy.
I could really use this poem as a eye-opener for many people.. People who believe logic and reason are the way to go. I respect you for writting it the way you have , and really putting facts and emotions together in a beautiful way.
Keep writting.
"The day we lose our need for dreams is the day the human race forfeits its soul." -John Chiam
"Morpheus: Do you believe in fate, Neo?
Neo: No.
Morpheus: Why not?
Neo: Because I don't like the idea that I'm not in control of my life." -Matrix
  








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