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Points: 890
Reviews: 25
Sat Jun 04, 2005 2:04 pm
Bazoo
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This really impressed me, Brad. Very good job; the imagery captured my attention well.
Mmm... the unicorn line in the second stanza seems a little on the cheesy/cliche end, though...
But I did really enjoy reading this.
Wow...I want to thank so many people for being here...well of course, God...and um...Nate...let's see...Liz...Brad...Chevy...Satan.
They're all cool.
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Sat Jun 04, 2005 10:31 pm
Misty
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stunning, brad. absolutely stunning.
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Sun Jun 05, 2005 4:12 pm
Incandescence
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Yeah. It's for our very own faith (i.e. Whitney)! Heee.
Anyway, the Unicorn bit was in reference to one of her previous poems where she said that if you still see unicorns then you are still innocent.
"If I have not seen as far as others, it is because giants were standing on my shoulders." -Hal Abelson
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Sun Jun 05, 2005 6:56 pm
faith
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*frolics with brad* I really do like this you know..
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Sun Jun 05, 2005 7:17 pm
Crysi
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Aww that's really sweet.
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