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Cold dreams



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Sun Dec 25, 2011 9:39 pm
neonwriter says...



I shiver as I walk across the cold, desolate dream land
The trees are bare and snow piles on, as if it were a topping to a meal
Winds whip my hair out behind my head as I trudge on
This is not a normal dream

Theres no other sign of life other than myself
My teeth chatter violently and they begin to hurt
I don't know if my feet are there anymore, cause' I cant feel them
I'm positive somehtings wrong in my head

Snow pelts on my face and almost instantly melts
The sky is gray and swelled to the brim with snow
I can see why no other animals live here
I really think I should wake up now

My tracks are being filled rapidly by falling snow, so it's like I was never here
The snow is up to my knees and my night gown is frozen at the bottom
I wonder where I am...
Please wake up, wake up, wake up, wake up!

The slippers mother got me are long gone in the snow
Thats when it happens
My knees buckle and I collapse into the frozen snowflakes
The sky is so hazy

My eyelids are fluttering and theres a fog on the world
Theres a fuzzy edge to everything I see
I close my eyes, I'm so very tired
I can't feel anything anymore

Jolting up in my bed, I give out a little relief sigh
That God awful dream is over
I rip the covers off of myself and stumble downstairs
I'm so glad it was a dream
We shall never forget 4-20-99
  








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