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Mon Nov 21, 2011 8:24 am
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Sun Nov 27, 2011 11:49 pm
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Mathew!!

Yay! Glad you're writing a Christian poem. Very, very true what you're saying. Although, talking about poetry, the fact that you said: "Beauty is seen by the eyes, Eyes that see the flesh." twice, makes me tilt my head and well... it makes me expect more of the poem. I'd find a way to say it again in other words, because I understand that you want to emphasize that, but when you repeat the same lines like that, it kind of sounds... not that creative. xD But other than that, this is great. You're an awesome writer and glad you use your talent to express a point like that one up there. Good job!

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The true adventurer goes forth aimless and uncalculating to meet and greet unknown fate.
— O. Henry (William Sydney Porter)