That was a vary inspirational poem. I loved it keep on writeing!
IHI means hi backwards, forwards, vertical, horizontal, and any other way and is pronounced by saying the individual letters, like so I H I. I came up with IHI as my thing, don't take it or I will send a scary monster after you ; D
I was going to write a really thorough-good review, but I started it, it came out WAY too harsh for my liking, and it all really just boiled down to this:
I didn't like the ending. He got a nice girl to help him? I don't have that so my futures bad?
See what I am saying? That makes your poem much to mainstream and unoriginal. Please change that. I think it's nice if you can write about a dyslexic kid finding hope, and you wrote beautifully. However, you took it all apart by bringing it into the love direction. See what I'm saying?
-Skis
By nature, all language is flawed.
"Peace cannot be kept by force, it can only be achieved by understanding," - Albert Einstein
You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason. — Anne Lamott
