My mind is a cube.
I am a series of Euclidian shapes.
I am dependent on Euclid.
As a better writer than myself once said, “All the world’s a stage.”
To this I must submit,
but
(Taking “script” to mean “God”, or perhaps “Rules”)
I cant find the "script" in your main text, or is the words in parenthesis part of the poem?
Our performances seem lacking,
I’ve never seen a convincing one. Even less so
should the audience disappear.
This is my suggestion:
Our performance didn't convince
It seemed like it lacked something. especially
when the audience disappeared
or is my suggestion worst? please tell me so that i can improve on my reviewing
Keep writing!
