Don't Speak

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Don’t speak
You can’t hear yourself
So why should the world hear you?
Don’t fall in love
Why should you
When you can’t understand your lover
Don’t stand up for yourself
It’s all right to be quiet
You can’t take notice of the support

You’re deaf

“Hello.” – “I love you.” – “I agree with you.”
You can’t hear those
You can only feel the hum of the throat
See the lips pucker and curve
Sight and touch can only do so much
Is it enough?

For them it’s not

But for me?

Don’t let other people shape you
Every person is unique
Your deafness makes you unique
Don’t back down
Fight for who you love
There’s always a chance of winning
Don’t shut out the world
Just because it is silent
In the end, the world is always kind
And we'll be a dream...

"Dee Dubbleyou." - BigBadBear




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This is absolutely brilliant. I'm actually lost for words. You tackle it soo brilliantly. Kudos is in order :P The first ... Section?/Paragraph? is amazing. The sarcasm is really effective. Alot of charm and i love it.

Ross wrote:
Don’t shut out the world
Just because it is silent


It gave me shivers. I love this line <33
What inspired you to write something so interesting??

-Pages <3
Having the ability to inspire and revoke feeling in someone through the power of speach and thought. That is truly an art and that is why good Authors and writers are so unique and hard to find.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic58744.html

Power is in the words :)




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Ross, I loved this, really beautiful. The one thing that bugged me was the end stanza, it got a little preachy and I was kind of disappointed with the last line and how it ended. But other then that I loved it!

Keep writing!

Loves you <3

~Hope
"I'd rather be hated for being who I am, then loved for who I'm not."



Follow your inner moonlight; don't hide the madness
— Allen Ginsburg