Well done

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Wildwood
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Sat May 30, 2009 12:54 pm
Wildwood says... · Sat May 30, 2009 12:54 pm
Well done, your an amazing writer :!:
This poem has depth and you stick to the tread all the way through.
There's nothing here to criticize which is really fantastic :!:
I'm looking forward to reading a few more of your poems,
Well done again,
Wildwood




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Jon
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Sat May 30, 2009 1:01 pm
Jon says... · Sat May 30, 2009 1:01 pm
Wildwood, to Reply to a topic, you have to click 'Post Reply'. You accidentally hit the New Post button. But! Thanks for commenting on a piece, or trying to! :D
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erratik_statik
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Sat May 30, 2009 2:59 pm
erratik_statik says... · Sat May 30, 2009 2:59 pm
I really liked the imagery you used here, and even though there was no rhyme, the flow was exceptional.

Oh, and the way you used your exclamations was brilliant!!

Gold star of course!

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I should have been a pair of ragged claws
Scuttling across the floors of silent seas. . . . . .

"The Lovesong of J Alfred Prufrock" T.S Eliot

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