If you did

I stared at your window across the street and thought
Do you love me?
After a long time I came to a conclusion.
You wouldn't have forced all those tears down my cheeks
if you did.

SimplyMe wrote:I stared at your window across the street and thought,
Do you love me?
After a long time I came to a conclusion.
You wouldn't have forced all those tears down my cheeks,
if you did.

I agree with Rosey Unicorn. You should make this longer. It was wonderful!!!

I would put the commas there, but I guess that you don't have to. I thought that maybe it would flow better. Not that your flow wa off. I can just read things easier that way!

So, awesome. Short, sweet, to the point.

Ta Ta for now!
_Writing for love is a passion_

~Lexie~