Young Writers Society

You're right. Angsty poetry does get annoying after the zillionth suicide poem.

My point is proven.

Lol ur both funny.

I liked the poem. I thought it was deep. And funny, in a sort of sarcastic way. Nice repitition.

Yay, another angsty poem from the egotistic man... ... what Misty Lynn said, that pretty much is what my mind is thinking.

he is, isn't he

I feel so...defined. And like I should shoot myself because my life is shit. Good job! Only thing I got to say is, instead of bolding that last line, put it by itself. I think it will give it more oomph.

I liked the bold at the end I liked the angstiness (if that's even a word)...I liked everything. I don't think I've ever been able to relate to something that you wrote so well. I wrote an entry in my diary like this. It was very poetic--I might post it here someday. Anyway, Brad...it was great and I loved it from beginning to end.

Yeah I really liked the poem. Incandescence you are an amazing poet

Pah. Great stuff.

You get the honour of being the first poem I'm printing off to go in my room.

Okay... I reread this thing like a dozen times trying to find SOMETHING I didn't like about this. But I couldn't. This is so true and so awesome. You really did a fantastic job.