This is a freewrite I did and I absolutely hate it, so go ahead, tear it apart.... It has no editing, completely raw and untouched.
i dont understand this
why do i have to be so strange
is it me,
is it something ive done?
i want to get out of this life,
just get me out
it consumes me,
my mind and soul
it occupies my every thought, chewing up my mind
i cant get rid of it,
so just get me out of here,
off of this planet
into a place where pain is not longer evident
please, dear god, get me out
or is it satan that will help,
that can deliver me from this already horrific dead?
tell me now,
anyone, someone, please
tell me who can help
me get out
or is it up to me,
a slit,
a swallow, anything
to get me out of here
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