Young Writers Society

This really impressed me, Brad. Very good job; the imagery captured my attention well.

Mmm... the unicorn line in the second stanza seems a little on the cheesy/cliche end, though...

But I did really enjoy reading this.

stunning, brad. absolutely stunning.

Yeah. It's for our very own faith (i.e. Whitney)! Heee.

Anyway, the Unicorn bit was in reference to one of her previous poems where she said that if you still see unicorns then you are still innocent.

*frolics with brad* I really do like this you know..

Aww that's really sweet.