Your poem is quite strange in its writing, but unique in its point.
"Does the satin on your bed remind you
of white walls, fresh paint, the smell of
new cars, changing lives, stained t-shirts and
soft, grass-tainted blue jeans on your knees? "
This part seems kind of hard to understand. To start a poem off like this seems quite confusing to me, but then again, I am quite easily confused.......
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