Young Writers Society

:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) Hehe. I'm an in bewtweener but that was still really funny! I think everyone was to busy laughing to tell exactly when 'Edward" came in. Could you clear that up? Perfect ending!!!!

Hi there! As requested, I won't go in-depth and review it randomly. I'll just give you my thoughts.

It was funny, very good parody. The movie title was awesome, I actually want to go see that now that I think about it. I can't really give this a serious review, but it was great, and had some truth to it. Good job!

Sporks

wow that was pretty interesting i'll admit! I am actually in love with the twilight saga but this was still pretty funny! really all i saw was one or two misspellings here and there but otherwise it was interesting! i do like that incredibly long movie title. Overall: i liked it. it was a good teaser. very funny. Good Job! you got very creative with this! you should never lose creativity. and always remember: when writing have fun! because if you have fun writing ur story then most likely the readers will have just as much fun reading it!

Oh my gosh, That was so funny

I could not stopo laughing.

I love when the time lapses

Like 9 tomorrows later.. so funny

I loved it (:

Oh my gosh, That was so funny

I could not stopo laughing.

I love when the time lapses

Like 9 tomorrows later.. so funny

I loved it (:

This was soooo funny! I nearly peed myself laughing!!! *LIKE*!!!

I personally have never liked Edward (he was either creepy or annoying or a mix of both), but now I can't help but feel sorry for the poor guy... This was fantastic and completely over-the-top- good stuff!

HAHA! I laughed so hard. If you hate twilight watch Alex Reads Twilight on YouTube. It's super funny.
Jenn

To Magnusbanefan13:

Found a tiny spelling mistake. "Story" doesn't have an e in it.

In British English, it does.
Nice fan fic, very fresh. =)

OHMYGOD this is awesome ! You're a genius ! Loved it loved it loved it !

Thanks for the laugh. Keep it up

Oh my god! This was really great! I'm a huge fan of Twilight and that made me laugh super hard. Its very true about most girls and their obsession. I'll have you know that I am NOT like that though

Oh my God, that's the most hilarious Twifanfic I've ever read! Laughed out loud so many times, and I just loved it.
Very nice writing techniques and balanced dialogue.
All mistakes I've spotted were pointed out by previous reviews, so no need to blurt them out again.
Very humorous, quirky, laughable weather you're a Twifan or Hater (personally I'm Switzerland).
Keep up the good work and I'd love to see what you might write in the future!
Oh my God, that's the most hilarious Twifanfic I've ever read! Laughed out loud so many times, and I just loved it.
Very nice writing techniques and balanced dialogue.
All mistakes I've spotted were pointed out by previous reviews, so no need to blurt them out again.
Very humorous, quirky, laughable weather you're a Twifan or Hater (personally I'm Switzerland).
Keep up the good work and I'd love to see what you might write in the future!

Oh my God, that's the most hilarious Twifanfic I've ever read! Laughed out loud so many times, and I just loved it.
Very nice writing techniques and balanced dialogue.
All mistakes I've spotted were pointed out by previous reviews, so no need to blurt them out again.
Very humorous, quirky, laughable weather you're a Twifan or Hater (personally I'm Switzerland).
Keep up the good work and I'd love to see what you might write in the future!

Aha. Love it

Thanks for the laugh! x

Hahahah, Oh that made me chuckle The perfect antidote to a cynical view on twilight.
Hahaha. That will actually keep me laughing for a while now...

Honestly, I thought it was hilarious. Well written and totally creative. Including with the name of the movie in the beginning. Very creative. Good job!
-Kadi