Young Writers Society

Chris: 22 of them are but only 18 here next to this plane but on 18 will enter. Welcome to the 3rd Season. When contestents do not get a souverneer they will be dropped from the Fall of greif. Lets see who will make it Chef will decide.And a confessional in the plane.

Chef:All you weak scrawny kids or big guys The votes have

Heather:Get on with the show

Chef:Blah BLah Calling 9 names they make it Noah,Eva

Noah:What

Eva:I am not doing this

Chef:Lindsay,Beth,Duncan

Beth and Lindsay: Yeah

Lindsay:Where do we go

Chef: Bridgett,Trent,Gwen and Geoff

Geoff:Ausome glad bridg made it

Bridgett:Me to

Bridgett(In Confessional):Me and Geoff Decided to still be dating but not obsessive

Trent:Cool Gwen

Gwen:Huhh

Trent:Whats wrong

Gwen(In Confessional):Now Me and Trent are Just FREINDS

Trent,Gwen,Lindsay,Beth,Bridgett,Geoff,Duncan,Noah and Eva got in the giant plane.When Chris arrived.

Chris:Ill take it from here

Chris:9 more spots you guys will compete for the spots Hidden here there are 9 tickets whoever gets them goes on RUN What are you waiting for

The 13 contestents were running.

Courtney(In Confessional): I will do anything to win

Justin:Hi Courtney

Courtney:Hi Can you help me find a ticket

Justin:Yeah

Justin(In Confessional):I like Fiesty

Courtney:Justin thers one can you go get it for me

She was pointing to a ticket across a ledge.

Justin:Ill get it for you

Justin jumped got the ticket.But was holding on a ledge. Courtney grabbed the ticket and pushed him.

Justin:I still love you

Meanwhile Katie and Sadie were walking.When they found Justin.

Katie:OMG its Justin

Justin: Mommy

Sadie:Can you hear us

Katie:Fine dont talk

Meanwhile Leshawna,Harold,Tyler,Heather and Cody were walking.

Heather:Lets make up

Leshawna:Yeah

Harold:This is like a vedio game

Heather:Dweeb

Leshawna:Watch it

Harold(In Confessional):This is like the episode were everyones trying to get the million and Total Drama Action Started

Cody:So Heather whats up

Suddenly they found Owen.

Owen:Hi Guys can I come with you

Cody:No

Cody(In Confessional):Owens my freind but he was a traitor

Owen(In Confessional):But Im was in debt *Owen Farts* HEHE

Tyler:Look 5 tickets

Leshawna:Yeah Boy but how are we going to get them

Heather:But one of us is going to be left out.

Tyler ran got the 5 tickets.

Cody:Youre not hurt

Tyler:What are you talking about *bumps into pole*

Than Cody,Leshawna,Owen and Harold grabbed the tickets.

Harold:Quick run there catching up

The other 7 were running as the 5 escaped.

Ezekiel:What does a ticket look like

Katie:The final 3 tickets

Sadie:Youre so smart

Tyler:RUN

DJ:Man this is hard to get

Justin:LALAL

The 7 were running.

Izzy:AHAHA

There was only a little wood area between them and the tickets.*Splash* *Splash*
Katie and Sadie fell.

Katie:At least were together

Izzy started doing a backflip.

Izzy: This is fun HAHA

*Splash* Justin fell in the water.

Justin:NO

The other 4 saw were next to the tickets.DJ and Izzy grabbed a ticket.

DJ:Excuse ME

Izzy:Woo Season 3 with Owen

Tyler grabbed the last ticket.

Exekiel:No

IN THE PLANE

There was a half a mile long plane with 4 bedrooms.2 bathrooms and 1 rest room

Chris:First Challenge Eygept

To be honest, I don't have a clue about the show Total Drama. So, I can only really come at this from a grammatical and spelling perspective. Right from the start, I noticed that you don't use punctuation marks and that there are quite a few spelling mistakes. If your computer doesn't have a spelling and grammar checker, you can find one online. There's even one right here on YWS. When you go to make a post, there's one located right above the white box. Just click the blue text, "Check spelling."