lol I thought this was funny.
I like harry potter and I like twilight. So I really like the way you've put that together
I like how harry and Edward have a total convo while just ignoring Bella.
I thought the spelling was fine.
keep writing
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"What does it look like i'm doing, i'm taking Bella for a piggy back ride" said Edward
Harry noticed Bella.
"Well hello gorgeous...." said Harry as he licked his hand and straightened his untidy hair.
Bella stares back. replies "..uh...i ..i..but..i..cheese cake"
"FOR THE LAST TIME I WILL GET YOU A CHEESE CAKE ON OUR WAY BACK TO FORKS!!" shouted Edward
" well we were in the same aisle....he was buying mac and cheese" replied edward
"dude...can you still sparkle?" asked harry
"maybe.....WANNA SEE?"
"OOOO!! I DO! I DO!" said bella
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