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Edward and Bella
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Points: 4920
Reviews: 39
Sun Sep 27, 2009 6:07 am
baron.vrinda
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i felt that the title of the story didn't fit in. and i really can't make out much from the story. it seems a little lost from its track...
but maybe if you expand it, it will become better.
however, i liked it!
Enjoy every moment of your life; you never know when it might come to an end...
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Sat Oct 17, 2009 11:34 pm
HidddenDarkness
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It was ok.
It did really fit with the whole Twilight thing.
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