The SPEW Gryphon II activated it's thrusters.
Its, not it's.
The SPEW Commandos moved inside, all ready coordinating with Adelaide as to where to put their equipment.
Already, not all ready. Also, "as to where to put" is reeeally bulky. See if you can make it prettier.
And:
"Sir, permission to come aboard?" Grif recognized her as Areida. A student of West Point, she was a capable leader and most importantly, she was a survivor. Grif was glad she was leading the SPEW squad.
*babbles* HOMG I'm in the story! Whee!
(My more important trait has, unfortunately, sent a certain Destiny's Child song rolling through my head. I used to blast Survivor in my room when I was in sixth grade.)
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