I quite liked this piece and I'm sure that there isn't anything I can say that other have said already.
One thing, though. Maleficent didn't have green skin, it was more of a grey hue. Perhaps you were thinking of the Wicked Witch from The Wizard of Oz?
Other than that, I was pleasantly surprised at the quality of it. A job very well done. Have you considered re-writing some more?
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