Young Writers Society

STAR WARS
Episode II


Cast of Characters

Anakin - thechosen1
Padme - Pampered_Princess
Obi-Wan - ForceMaster
Yoda - LittleGreenPwner
Count Dooku - rlybaddood
Jango Fett - dna4sale
Boba Fett - chippy
Lars - Farmboy
Beru - Farmgirl

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Pampered_Princess has signed on

Pampered_Princess: no ones online

Rlybaddood sent you an e-bomb! *boom*

Pampered_Princess: ok then

ForceMaster has signed on.
Thechosen1 has signed on.

ForceMaster: padme’s online
Thechosen1: OMG RLY? =O
ForceMaster: yep
Thechosen1: OMG SET US UP IN A GROUP CHAT. I HAVENT SEEN HER SENSE I CHANGE MY SN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ForceMaster: I will if you relax >.>
Thechosen1: srry
Thechosen1: im relaxed im relaxed im relaxed
ForceMaster: …

Pampered_Princess has entered the chat.

Thechosen1: PADME *hugs*
Pampered_Princess: Anny?
Thechosen1: Yep!!!
Pampered_Princess: lol I like ur sn
Thechosen1: Thanks <33

Rlybaddood has sent Pampered_Princess an e-bomb *boom*

Pampered_Princess: That’s the second time that’s happened.
Thechosen1: I WILL PROTECT YOU!! ANYTHING FOR YOU *wink wink*
Pampered_Princess: …

Pampered_Princess is offline.

Thechosen1: obi-wan I <3 her
ForceMaster: k.
Thechosen1: I gtg

Thechosen1 is offline.


Purplerox has signed in.

Purplerox: hey Obi-Wan. I need ya to talk to Jango Fett (his sn is dna4sale) he has all these weird accounts sending me and yoda messages.
ForceMaster: ok

Purplerox is offline.
Dna4sale is online.

Dna4sale: hi
ForceMaster: Mace Windau keeps telling me you have all these weird accounts sending Yoda and him messages?
Dna4sale: yep there called CLONES. They’re really cool.

Chippy is online.

Dna4sale: Say hello, Boba ^.^
Chippy: Hello!
Dna4sale: this is my son. Soon we’re gonna have a whole army of clones =D
ForceMaster: gtg
Dna4sale: no you don’t
Dna4sale has challenged ForceMaster to a game of Saber Wars!

Accept! Decline!

ForceMaster: I cant play right now
Dna4sale: YES YOU CAN
ForceMaster: …
ForceMaster: Fine, I’ll accept. Just let me kill you
Dna4sale: no
ForceMaster: I have you anyway
ForceMaster: WTF? You did not just get the jetpack ability
Dna4sale: yep. *evil laugh* I just knocked your saber out of your hands! There’s nothing you can do now!
ForceMaster: Yep, the game respawns it xD

Dna4sale is offline.

ForceMaster: …

ForceMaster is offline.

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Thechosen1 is online.
Pampered_Princess is online.

Thechosen1: IM PROTECTING YOU FROM MORE E-BOMBS
Pampered_Princess: k
Thechosen1: ya know, I never told you how much I missed you
Pampered_Princess: I did too. You’ve grown up, you know.
Thechosen1: lets go out
Pampered_Princess: no srry
Pampered_Princess: im like five years older then u
Thechosen1: so?
Pampered_Princess: you’re a little boy
Thechosen1: …
Thechosen1: you just said I was grown up! I’ll prove it, watch. *kisses*
Pampered_Princess: ZOMG I <3ed that. *kisses*
Pampered_Princess: Sure we can go out
FarmBoy has signed in
FarmGirl has signed in

FarmBoy: hi I’m Lars
Thechosen1: hi

Threepio has entered the chat.

Threepio: Master Anakin!

Threepio has signed off.

Thechosen1: Threepio? Lol I forgot about him
FarmGirl: Anakin, we know where ur mom is!
Thechosen1: o rly
FarmBoy: yep! Go to the “Jutland Wastes” server
Thechosen1: k

Thechosen1 is offline.
The chosen1 is online.

Thechosen1: HER ACCOUNT IS CLOSED D: so I pwned everyone on that server in saber wars!! IM SO ANGRY
FarmGirl is offline.
FarmBoy is offline.

Pampered_Princess: You okay, Annie? *hugs*
Thechosen1: *pushes away*
Pampered_Princess: 0_o
Thechosen1: I hate everyone

Thechosen1 is offline.

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ForceMaster is online.
Purplerox is online
LittleGreenPwner is online.

ForceMaster: I can’t find Anakin anywhere. He was supposed to stay in the Naboo server.
LittleGreenPwner: In the Tattooine server he is
ForceMaster: Whats he doing there?
Purplerox: idk, but Jango Fett really keeps bothering us with the extra accounts he’s making. They are pwning us in saber wars =(
ForceMaster: that has to be stopped. Lemme find Anakin.

Thechosen1 is online.
Pampered_Princess is online.

LittleGreenPwner: Under mycontrol, I have that. Count Dooku we need. My top spot in saber wars he has.
ForceMaster: Anakin and I will go.
Thechosen1: padme’s coming
ForceMaster: no she’s not
Thechosen1: she’s my gf
ForceMaster: idc
Thechosen1: …

Pampered_Princess is offline.
LittleGreenPwner is offline.
PurpleRox is offline.

Rlybaddood has entered the chat.

ForceMaster: Wait, Anakin!
Thechosen1 has challenged rlybaddood to Saber Wars!

Accept! Decline!

Thechosen1: I got you lol
Rlybaddood: nope
Thechosen1: OMG U CUT OFF MY HAND
Thechosen1 has left the game.

ForceMaster has challenged rlybaddood to Saber Wars!

Accept! Decline!

Rlybaddood: waay too easy
ForceMaster: gaah you killed me
ForceMaster has left the game.

LittleGreenPwner is online

LittleGreenPwner has challenged rlybaddood to a game of Saber Wars!

Accept! Decline!

LittleGreenPwner: Die you will >.>
Rlybaddood: Nope.
LittleGreenPwner:
Rlybaddood: lol why do you keep blocking the stuff I throw at you
LittleGreenPwner: Fight me with your saber
Rlybaddood: k
Rlybaddood: OMG U JUST DRAINED HALF MY LIFE

Rlybaddood left the game.
Rlybaddood is offline.

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Thechosen1 is online
Pampered_Princess is online

Thechosen1: I love you
Pampered_Princess: lets get married
Thechosen1: k
Pampered_Princess: are we gonna have kids?
Thechosen1: Maybe but they’ll have no impact whatsoever on our lives

THE END

LittleGreenPwner:

Made of win, that right there. Very, very nice.

I love how you treat the lightsaber battles. And Jango Fett... Oh gosh, I laughed my butt off at "dna4sale".

I really like this idea for some reason. It just comes across as so ridiculously hilarious.

Keep it up!

~GryphonFledgling

ForceMaster: Mace Windau keeps telling me you have all these weird accounts sending Yoda and him messages?

Dna4sale: yep there called CLONES. They’re really cool.
You know how Windu is spelled. No biggie.

Thechosen1: HER ACCOUNT IS CLOSED D: so I pwned everyone on that server in saber wars!! IM SO ANGRY
FarmGirl is offline.
FarmBoy is offline.

Pampered_Princess: You okay, Annie? *hugs*
Thechosen1: *pushes away*
Pampered_Princess: 0_o
Thechosen1: I hate everyone

I loved this part, it had me laughing so hard XD.

You really need to keep this up, and make the whole Star Wars Saga. I'm already a huge fan, and am more than happy to review the rest of them. Keep in touch!

Okay. This is just like an actual chat room. Still they annoy me. So good job, you made it clear it was a chatroom. Just not my thing.

O my god!! I just read the first one too and these crack me up!! I don't have much crit so umm, yeah I like it:D!

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Meh, not as funny as the first one, but still pretty good. You missed some important deatils that would have been funny to add. Like when Mace beheads Jango. Yeah, I'm a nerd. Got a problem with that???